- Very clever titles
- Good music choice
- Nice mise en scene
Improvements to be made:
- Voiceover- not strong enough, needs more emotion
- Colour correction- needs to change and be improved throughout the time-lapse
- Music volume- in some places it's too loud or too quiet. We need to get that balance right.
- Transitions- something between the two panning shots to signify that we are the same people as the younger children. Possibly a dissolve or similar transition.
- Lengthen some titles- the domino title needs to be longer; more time needed on Tilly Hawkins' name.
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